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                                   ELMO IS COMING

                            ELMO IS COMING

Elmo is soon arriving for your reading enjoyment. He is the main character in my two novellas, Elmo’s Invention and Elmo’s Sojourn.

In Elmo’s Sojourn, written first, he is a retired Los Alamos scientist but has never strayed from his love of science. He has a theory that it is possible to travel through space through wormholes. He builds a device, and it works! However, Elmo goes nowhere, but a creature appears in his cellar lab. Elmo being Elmo, decides to return with the creature to its home. Thus, the adventure for Elmo, in a strange world begins.

Elmo’s Sojourn has a long history. The novella was first published online by Bewildering Stories in 2006. Later, it was published by Mélange Books as an eBook and in a print anthology, Curious Hearts, in 2010. Then, purely by accident, I discovered the first two chapters of the eight-chapter novella were published in China in an English-language science fiction publication in 2008.

Elmo’s Invention, written as a prequel to Elmo’s Sojourn, has only been published on my blog. In this novella Elmo is working as a scientist in Los Alamos and has the idea to build a time machine.

He builds it, and it works, but not in the way he intended. His discovery is made public and causes an uproar for Elmo and his wife in their community, and beyond.

After things die down and Elmo is using his machine to raise chickens it ceases to work. In the process of repairing it, he stumbles upon the reason why it was not working as intended. But as a true time machine, more problems lurk in the future.

I had a great deal of fun writing these two novellas and I hope you have as much fun reading them.

I will begin publishing Elmo’s Invention a chapter at a time every three days on by blog. When completed, Elmo’s Sojourn will make its appearance.

February 4, 2025 at 2:21 pm Leave a comment

                          ELMO’S SOJOURN

                          ELMO’S SOJOURN

Elmo’s Sojourn is a novella I wrote awhile ago and was first published by Bewildering Stories in 2007. Since then, it has been published by Mélange Books (no longer publishing) in an anthology, Curious Hearts, and as a stand-alone e-book.

The story involves Elmo, a retired Los Alamos retired scientist who accidentally discovers the ability to travel through space using wormholes. With this new knowledge he travels to a distant planet and discovers an alien civilization with a devastating problem. A problem for which he stumbles upon a solution.  

I was checking Google to see what was being done with my published work when I stumbled upon the fact that the first two chapters of the novella has been published in China.

Just now I have also found that Elmo’s Sojourn is still available for sale. I’ve provided a link if anyone is interested.

https://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/elmos-sojourn-walt-trizna/1118770303

November 20, 2024 at 1:19 pm Leave a comment

HAWAIIAN DISASTERS IN PRINT

                  HAWAIIAN DISASTERS IN PRINT

There is a new novel recently published by Michael Crichton, posthumously entitled, Eruption, involving the threat of a volcanic eruption on The Big Island of the Hawaiian islands. The novel also involves the revelation of a secret of the military. Currently this novel is on the New York Times bestseller list for hardcover fiction.

I mention this for there is another novel, published in the recent past, which also involves the eruption of volcanos along the entire chain of the Hawaiian islands. What follows is a disaster of unbelievable proportions which will change the world forever.

For those interested, contact me and I will give further information about this novel.

July 4, 2024 at 3:57 pm Leave a comment

MANSION OF NIGHTMARES, A GHOST STORY

Mansion of Nightmares was accepted for publication in the print anthology, Spellbound, by Mélange Books in June 2011.

             MANSION OF NIGHTMARES

My name is Patrick Brodie, and I fear I am going mad.  Let me change that; I am going mad with the fear of my death.  I have lived all my twenty years in a small town in southeast Pennsylvania, and located in the boundaries of this town is where my problem began.  I fear this shadow hanging over my life may never end, or perhaps it is over.  I shall never know for sure.

I fear sleep, more specifically, dreaming.  I am in dread of what might happen during a dream – my destruction.  I know I can escape the horror in my dream, but what if some day, I can’t.

Ever since I was quite young, I was intrigued by an old, abandoned mansion not far from my home.  I would ask my dad, as we drove by the forlorn estate, “Dad, what is that place?”

“Patrick,” he would answer, “I don’t know.  I’ve heard stories about it, but they make little sense.  Tell you the truth, I’ve often wondered about the true story of that place myself.  Someday, when you’re older, why don’t you trace the property’s history?  It shouldn’t be that difficult.  Maybe the local historical society would be a good place to start.”

If I had only taken my dad’s advice before I decided to investigate the mansion with my friend, Brian, I might have discovered the legend and Brian might still be alive.  But what’s done is done.  There is no going back.  If I am unfortunate to return to the mansion in my dreams, I may join Brian in what, I fear, is a never – ending hell.

The mansion that is the center of this horror sat at the intersection of two major thoroughfares at the edge of the small hometown.  The place was far removed from either road by maybe a thousand feet.  For those who drive by it is practically invisible, hidden by towering trees and overgrown with vines.  The entrance to the deteriorating road leading to the house was framed by two brick columns with peeling plaster, between the columns hung a heavy chain blocking the entrance.

The mansion was enormous, the largest construction in the area, and surely one of the oldest.  The exterior, which once was white, had turned a mottled gray.  The two-storied structure contained many additions.  Several gables occupied the roof, along with four massive chimneys. The roof was now sagging, a testament of neglect, as columns still supported the entrance with its massive doors.

The property was enormous; I had no idea how large.  The area had experienced a rapid increase in construction, yet no Mc Mansions sprung up like mushrooms as they did these days in almost every empty tract of land.

I wanted to explore this fascinating structure, but not alone.

It was a fall sunny Saturday, when I approached my friend, Brian Jacobs, to join me on my adventure.  I said to Brian, “You know that old house?”  And then I went on to describe it.

“Sure, Pat, that place gives me the creeps every time I pass it.  I guess every town has a haunted house, if there’s one in this town, that’s it.”

“Brian, I want you to go with me and explore it.”

“Are you nuts?”  He answered.  “We’ve both lived here for eighteen years and how many times have you heard of someone talk about going into that creepy place?”

“Well,” I said, “never.”

“Right.  So maybe there’s a reason.”  

“Like what?” I asked.

Brian answered, “Like you might not come out.  I don’t know.”

“Exactly,” I answered, “you don’t know.  We could be the first.  Where’s your spirit of adventure?  What could happen?”

I could not put into words because I was drawn to explore the old mansion, I just was.  After I made many derogatory remarks about his manhood, Brian reluctantly agreed.  He’s, my buddy.

“Okay genius, how do we get in with no one seeing us?” he asked.

I had already thought about how we would approach the mansion, “Some Saturday we’ll walk over.  We only live about a fifteen-minute walk away.  I’ll meet you about noon and we’ll go explore.”

“Oh, now I see,” Brian said.  “We just stroll past the ‘Do Not Trespass’ signs, duck under the chain keeping everyone out, while we are on a major busy street in the area, and casually saunter up the long drive.  Sounds like fool-proof plan to me, fool”.

“That’s not what we’re going to do smart-ass.  We’ll approach it from the rear.  I’m sure we’ll be able to get in with nobody seeing us.”

                    * * *

A month or so later we finally had a Saturday when we would both be free for the afternoon.  We met and walked through the wild area of trees and brambles to approach the mansion from the rear.  As we walked closer to the structure, I was overwhelmed by a feeling of uncertainty.  Seeing the building up close lent an entirely new perspective than when viewed at distance from the road.  It certainly had the air of neglect, but it still radiated the feeling of a strength not found in this day and age.

Like commandos, we stealthily made our way to the front entrance.  This wasn’t necessary for the tall oak trees that surrounded the mansion, to say nothing of the massive number of vines the covered not only the trees, but the house itself, hid any view of the entrance from the road. 

As we approached the entrance, I found what I expected; the huge doors were chained and secured with a massive padlock.

“Okay, what do we do now?” Brian asked.

I answered, “No problem.  Didn’t you notice all the tall broken windows that we walked past on the first floor?  We just break them a little more, and we’re in.”

I could read a great deal of apprehension in Brian.  I felt the same, but I was also the one who started this whole thing, and I was determined to see it through.  Looking back, you might say good sense was replaced by pride.

We walked around the structure, and before long, found a window destroyed by a fallen branch.  We cleared the debris away from the window, and there was our entrance.

The gloom was overpowering, even though it was day.  A feeling of dread overcame me, but I had to go on, I was the one that initiated this adventure.  Dust lay heavy on the floor and every other surface. 

Brian whispered, as if he were in a church or a library, “Pat, this just doesn’t feel right.  I don’t think we should be here.”

I answered, “Brian, it’s the middle of the day.  Bad things happen only at night, and that’s in the movies.  This is real.  Let’s go explore.”

We had entered through the dining room, and soon found a massive wooden staircase, decrepit but for the most part intact, leading to the upper levels.  Along the way we left our tracks in the dust.  It was obvious that no one had been in this house for a very long time.  I’m not sure if this allayed or enforced our feeling of discomfort upon entering the structure.

We carefully crept up the staircase, singularly, testing each step before applying our full weight.  Surprisingly, the stairs were in good condition, having no trouble accepting our tread, which seemed unusual at the time, but later the reason would become crystal clear.

The landing on the second floor was also intact, along with the long hallway containing six closed doors.  Upon trying the doors, we discovered the bedrooms beyond were just a mass of rotten floors and collapsed ceilings.  It was evident, also, that many of the gabled rooms and roofs had completely deteriorated, collapsed onto the bedrooms, yet mysteriously, the structure maintained some integrity.  As I mentioned earlier the first five bedrooms, we examined were all but destroyed with the above gabled rooms and roof collapsing in on them and becoming victims of the elements.  Then we opened the door to the sixth bedroom, and much to our surprise, found the room to be dust covered but intact.

Somehow, the last bedroom we entered had escaped the ravages of time.  The walls, although lined with rotting bookcases, appeared strong as well as the floor.  This room must have contained a massive library.  I could only imagine the magnificent books these now decrepit shelves must have contained.  The wall opposite the window contained a massive fireplace, still appeared to be able to welcome a warming fire.  Dust was heavy on the floor, but the room was unusually sound.  Neither one of us could understand how this room had survived while the others had become decayed. 

Brian said, “This place gives me the creeps.  Why is this room okay?  What is that all about?  Let’s get the hell out of here, I’ve seen enough.”

“Okay, Brian, I guess we’ve seen enough up here.  Let’s go back downstairs and explore the first floor.  That should be much safer and less scary.”

We made our way down and began to explore, I must say, with a great deal more confidence.  The only room we had examined so far was what we thought to be the dining room, which when we exited, allowed a view of the staircase.  Directly off from the dining room, we entered a large room that must have been the kitchen.  A wing off the dining room contained a room lined with decaying bookshelves, which we assumed was a library or study.  Another door of the dining room led toward the front of the mansion.  That was where we found a massive room, which we imagined must have been the living room where a multitude of guests could be entertained.  It was also there that we made a discovery that will haunt me all the days of my life, and I’m sure, cost Brian his.

Brian whispered, although there was no need to, “I’m getting out of here.  This place is way beyond creepy.”

I assured Brian we would leave soon, but for some reason, I wanted to explore this room.  The room, of course, was empty upon first inspection.  Then we noticed a massive fireplace that nearly filled one wall, and above the mantle was a portrait.  This was the only remnant of decoration or furniture that remained. 

Above the fireplace was the portrait of a young woman.  She appeared to be in her early twenties and of rare beauty.  She had raven hair made-up in an extreme hairdo of bygone times.  Severe was her dress, a dress buttoned high up to her slim neck, but none of these trappings could conceal her beauty.  We were both drawn to the painting.

In the painting, the girl stood to the left, while to the right, in the distance, was the very mansion we were now in as it appeared in its glory days.  Between the girl and the mansion was a great looming storm.  Massive grey clouds swirled through the sky, yet the girl appeared unconcerned.  The storm gave the painting an ominous feeling.

Brian said, “She must have been so hot.  Who do you think she was?”

I studied the painting, and said, “I’m sure she was important to the owner.”

As we made a closer inspection of the painting, we found that it was not hung over the fireplace, but rather, attached to the wall.  We both tried to move it without success.

Brian again whispered, “Shit man, this is beyond creepy.  This place has been gutted, for who knows how long, of everything but this picture.  What’s that about?”

I answered, but not with a valid explanation, “For the obvious reason, asshole.  You can’t get it off the wall.  The important question is: why can’t we get it off the wall?”

We left the mansion the same way we entered.  But the image of that beautiful girl was hauntingly burned into my mind.  Later, I would find she had also made a lasting impression on Brian.

I went home thinking of the mansion and the beautiful girl I had seen in the painting.  Perhaps I thought about her a bit too much.  For that night, I had a dream that would become the nightmare of my life.

In my dream, I returned to the mansion, but it appeared as it had existed in the past.  The structure was gleaming white and not overgrown with vines.  The roof was intact and not crumbling in on itself. It was solid and secure. There was a large fence made of iron stances separating the property from a dirt road.  The massive expanse between the house and the road was a magnificent green.  Then before my eyes night rapidly fell.  The mansion was dark with the exception of one room on the second floor, one of the bedrooms.  I knew from the location of the light that it was the very room that Brian and I found to be somehow preserved.  I soon discovered the reason it was so immaculately intact, but not why.

I suddenly found myself in the bedroom I observed light from the lawn.  The fireplace contained a welcoming fire.  All around the room candles were lit, offering a mellow glow and the feeling of peace.  Opposite the fireplace was a large, canopied bed with the covers turned down.  The remainder of the room was filled with what I considered antique furniture.  But what do I know. 

From a door to the right of the canopied bed, a door slowly opened.  I cannot describe the fear I felt at that moment, even though it was just a dream.

From the opened door stepped the young woman from the portrait hanging below.  She was barefoot and wore a diaphanous nightgown.  Her raven hair was down around her shoulders.  Clear were her beautiful breasts and rose-red nipples.  My eyes traveled down the gossamer fabric to the black thatch of hair between her legs.

She beckoned me with lovely, outstretched arms and an alluring smile.  I felt myself become hard and could not wait to enter those welcoming arms.

As I stepped forward eagerly, my feet tangled, and I fell to the carpeted floor.  That act of clumsiness saved my life, but for how long I don’t know.

Before my eyes, the air around the beautiful girl wavered; before my eyes stood a monster backed by time.  If there is a hell, this demon was one of its residents.  Her delicate hands grew talons, and her body became an obscene visage.  I backpedaled out of the room, and once clear of the door, ran for my life.

That was when the dream ended.

I awoke the next morning with a start, tangled in my sheets, fully remembering the wonderful dream that soon became a nightmare.  The welcoming sight of my bedroom offered the feeling of safety and security.  Those sensations were fleeting, for I immediately knew something was terribly wrong.  My feet ached.

Upon inspection, I found that they were blackened, bruised and cut.  A cold chill went through my body as I realized the dream was perhaps not a dream.  I knew what I had to do.

                    * * *

I dressed and had a quick breakfast, and then set out for the local historical society.  Our town isn’t very large, and the mansion stood on such a large piece of property that I was certain there some knowledge of the place’s history must be recorded.

As I entered the research section, I was approached by a woman who appeared to be in her thirties.  Otherwise, the area was empty.  She said, “I’m Marjorie Factor, head of research for the most part, I am research.  How can I help you?”

I told her about the mansion.  “I’m curious about the history of the place.  And why the property was never sold.”  To my surprise, she knew exactly the piece of property I was talking about.

“You’re talking about the old Brewster place.  We do have information on the history of the place.  It was quite a magnificent piece of property, in its time.  I’ll show you where to find the documents, but after you have studied them and want more information, I suggest you return them tomorrow.  That’s when our volunteer, Elizabeth McConnell, will be working here.  She is in her late eighties and knows more about the area than anyone I’ve met around here.  She can fill you in about the Brewster Manor legend.  She was told about the legend by her mother, who lived into her nineties.  Her mother, Florence, worked as a maid for Nathaniel Brewster.  Florence was present when the seeds of the legend were sown.

“I’ll show you what records we have, but if you’re interested, I strongly suggest you come back tomorrow and speak to Elizabeth.  Depending on how much detail you want, she can tell you things that have never been recorded.”

Marjorie led me to a basement room lined with file cabinets.  She said, “Our material is referenced by year and subject.  I suggest you begin with the name, Brewster.  Enjoy your research.”  She then left me to my work.

I quickly found a heavy file with the heading, Brewster.  I brought the file to one of the tables provided, sat down with my pad and pen, and began reading.

Nathaniel Brewster made a fortune in building railroads.  There was a long article about his background published in 1869, when he moved to this area.  He was then in his forties and a bachelor.  Brewster said, in an interview, that he was married to his work.  But the next article indicated that was about to change.  The article was an engagement announcement of Mr. Nathaniel Brewster to Miss Amy Douglas. The article was accompanied by a picture of the couple.

Brewster looked like a man who was accustomed to being the one in control.  He appeared intense, with piercing eyes, not one you would want to cross.  Amy was a beauty.  She had black hair and looked to be in her early twenties.  She strongly resembled the girl in the portrait we discovered in the mansion.  Could she be the same woman in the painting? 

Further article described Brewster’s business success.  Then, in an article dated 1871, there was a piece talking about the beginning of construction on Brewster Manor, designed by a famous architect.  The building of Brewster Manor was apparently a major point of interest in the community.

I soon came to nearly the end of the file when I discovered a shocking piece of information about the Brewsters.  At the back of the file were three small articles, folded, that could easily be missed.  One was a birth announcement, and one an obituary filed on the same day.  Amy had died giving birth to her daughter, Sarah.

The final article was the obituary of Nathaniel Brewster.  He lived more than twenty years after his wife, Amy, died.  His wife was mentioned in the obit, but there was no mention of a daughter.  I felt this was very strange and was certain I would return tomorrow to learn the Legend of Brewster Manor and try to make some sense of my mysterious dream.

After gathering my notes and returning the Brewster file, I went to find Marjorie.  She was stationed at her desk; she looked up and asked, “Did you find what you wanted?”

I answered, “Yes and no.  I would really like to talk to your volunteer about the legend of the mansion.  When will she be in?”

“Come tomorrow after ten.  I’ll let her know if you want to talk to her.  I’ll tell you; I think she would be anxious to talk to you about the residence.”

“I’ll be back tomorrow,” I said.  “Thanks for your help.”

                                                           * * *

The next morning, while I sat eating breakfast, my mom received a phone call.  She turned to me while she held the phone, “Its Brian’s father.  Brian’s parents are frantic.  He went to sleep last night, and everything appeared normal.  Now he’s gone.  They haven’t a clue as to where he may have gone. 

“Do you know anything about where he may have gone?  Did he say anything?”

“I haven’t seen Brian for a few days,” I answered.  “And the last time I did see him he was fine.”  But as I talked to my mother, I could not help but wonder if Brian had had the same dream.  What had I set in motion with my curiosity?

My mother was still on the phone when I left for the historical society.  It was not ten yet, I just needed to leave the house and be alone with my thoughts.  I thought about prospects that were unbelievable, unthinkable, that couldn’t possibly happen.

I entered the historical society a little after ten and proceeded to Marjorie’s desk.  Sitting next to Marjorie was a frail old woman, whom, I was sure, was the volunteer that would answer my many questions.

As I came closer, I heard Marjorie say, “This is the young man I was telling you about, Elizabeth.  He was researching the old Brewster place, and I told him you could give him more detail, and about the legend.”

The old woman stood and came around the desk to shake my hand.  At first sight, she appeared frail, but that was deceiving, for she had a firm grip and pale blue eyes that twinkled as those of a younger woman.  With a determined walk she led me down to the research area.

As we walked, she said, “It’s most unusual that anyone is still interested in Brewster Manor, especially such a young man as you.  May I ask why you want to know about the place?”

“Well,” I said, “I’ve noticed the place since I was a small kid.  I just wanted to know more about it.”

Elizabeth suddenly stopped.  “You haven’t been in there have you, son?”

My silence answered the question.

“Oh dear,” Elizabeth said, “This is not good.  This is trouble.  I’m probably the only one who knows the legend of Brewster Manor, and surely the only one that knows it is more than a legend.”

We approached a reference table and sat opposite each other.  The concern on the old lady’s face sent a chill down my spine.  She began speaking quietly and would eventfully answer my questions and confirm my worst fears.

“As I’m sure you know, Brewster Manor was built by Nathaniel Brewster.  He was a wealthy man and somewhat of a loner, that is, until he met his future wife, Amy. 

“The local papers were full of their marriage and then the building of the mansion.  Once the mansion was built, they hired a small army of servants, one of which was my mother.  My mother’s name was Florence, and she was there when talk of the legend began.  She, however, knew that at least some of it was not legend, but truth.

“Nathaniel and Amy moved into the manor.  They were so happy.  Nathaniel worshiped his wife.  My mother overheard him tell Amy over and over how much she had changed his life and made him more human.  In a short time, Amy became pregnant, and the couple could not be happier.  Nathaniel looked forward to filling the mansion with children and having heirs to pass on his wealth.  Those were the happiest days poor Nathaniel would ever have.

“Amy was a petite woman, and the baby grew to be quite large.  This was the 1870’s and medical knowledge was not it is today.  Amy died giving birth to her daughter, Sarah.

“Nathaniel Brewster was devastated, to say the least.  A dark curtain settled over the entire household; one that would never lift.

“I don’t know if Nathaniel ever held his daughter.  Her care was left to the servants.  Nathaniel Brewster once again sought refuge in work, and as my mother told me, at nights in drink.  He appeared, to my mother, to hate the baby.  He held the infant responsible for his wife’s death.

Nathaniel kept the child a virtual prisoner in the mansion.  She was not allowed to leave unless supervised.  And it came to a point that she was not allowed to leave at all.  Her teachers were brought in.  They became her only window to the world.  She became an avid reader and devoured books.”

“I found rotting bookshelves in what must have been her bedroom.”

 After a nod, Elizabeth continued, “Baby Sarah went from infant, to toddler, to child with little input from her father.  Then a strange change occurred.  As Sarah reached her teenage years, Nathaniel took a sudden interest in his daughter, for she became the image of her mother.  Nathaniel developed a love-hate relationship with her.  In his twisted mind, he hated Sarah because she had robbed him of his wife, but he loved the image of his wife that Sarah had become.

“As Sarah approached her late teens, the resemblance she had to her mother was more than remarkable; it was eerie.  Nathaniel had his daughter sit for a portrait.  That painting was hung over the mantle in the main room.

“Then one night, things went horribly wrong.  My mother said that Nathaniel was up late one night drinking, as was usually the case.  She watched him stagger upstairs, and instead of going to his bedroom, he entered his daughter’s. 

“No one knows exactly what happened that fateful night, but a terrible scream was heard throughout the house.  In a few moments, Sarah came running down the stairs, her clothes in disarray.  She ran out the front door and into the forest as Nathaniel Brewster shouted, ‘Damn you to hell.  You took my wife and now offer me no pleasure.’

“Sarah was never seen again.”

I shifted uncomfortably in my chair.  This story was beyond horrible.  So that’s whose portrait hung over the fireplace.  “But that doesn’t seem to be much of a legend,” I said.  “It’s just a horrible truth.”

“There you are right, young man; now the facts become legend.  Nathaniel Brewster became a man existing on the border of insanity.  He lived for two years after the incident with his daughter.  His decline was rapid after those two years, alcohol was the most likely culprit.  As finally he lay dying, the servants gathered around him.  He had no close family. 

“My mother was present when he shouted with his dying breath, “Sarah, protect my home.”

“Suddenly my mother, and all the rest of the servants, heard a loud thud that shook the entire mansion.  No one could imagine what had happened.  The next morning it was discovered that the portrait of Sarah Brewster no longer hung over the mantle but was attached to the wall.  No matter how hard the servants tried, it was impossible to move.

“Distant relatives were located.  They ordered the contents and the property sold.  The only item remaining in the mansion was the portrait of Sarah Brewster.  No one wanted to damage the wall while the mansion was for sale, and so it remained.  I am told that it remains there to this day.”

The old woman was silent, looking at me intently.  Finally, I answered, “It still does.”

Elizabeth shook her head, and said, “I was afraid it was still there, and that you saw it.  This is where the legend begins.

“Many buyers expressed an interest to purchase the mansion, primarily for the property.  The house had fallen into disrepair the twenty odd years since Amy’s death.  Nathaniel showed no interest in preserving it while he lived there.  The building was not worth the asking price, but the property was of great value.  But the property was never sold.

“All the serious buyers just disappeared.”

Elizabeth sat quietly, and then said, “They all disappeared after examining the mansion, and the portrait of Sarah Brewster over the fireplace.  The legend developed that somehow the mansion did not want to be sold; that Sarah protected it.  Some of the locals think that it had something to do with the portrait and Nathaniel beckoning his daughter to protect his property.  Eventually, buyers no longer came forward and all the locals in the area stayed clear of the mansion.  The legend of the portrait was forgotten, and then you came along.  I should mention that some have reported seeing a light in the upper floor.  But that was surely a reflection of headlights, or the moon.

“Anything strange happen to you since you went exploring, son?”

I remained silent, and then told her about my dream and Brian’s disappearance.

Now it was Elizabeth’s turn to remain silent.  She finally said, “I don’t know what you’ve started or where your friend is, but I don’t think you will see him again.”

She rose and made her way out of the room leaving me with my thoughts and fears.

                    * * *

Full of terror and doubts of the unknown I left for home. 

It took me some time to muster my strength, but I decided that I must return to the mansion.  No matter what the danger, I had to see the portrait of Sarah Brewster one more time.

Taking the same route as before, I once again stood gazing at the painting. I stared at the same lovely face in the foreground, but sudden movement drew my attention to the left of the figure.  The gray storm clouds between the woman and the mansion to the right in the background began to stir.

I rubbed my eyes, hoping to remove the moving image, yet the clouds continued to swirl.  Before my horrified eyes, images began to take shape within the clouds.  Gray faces began to emerge.  The closest to Sarah, over her left shoulder, was that of Brian.  His visage was one of intense horror.  Slowly, other faces were revealed in ever decreasing size leading to the mansion.  Could these be the potential buyers that disappeared? 

I shook my head in disbelief, and then noticed yet another change.  Now Sarah was smiling, a smile that possessed an intense evil.

How could I ever explain what happened to Brian?  Who would believe that he now resided in this torturous painting?  I ran from the mansion knowing that in my dream, if I had not stumbled, my horrified image would be there too.

                  * * *

It’s been years now since I decided to explore that horrible structure.  We’ve had heavy snow of late, and the weight of the snow has caved in the mansion’s roof.  The mansion is dying.  Perhaps once it is gone, those poor souls trapped will be freed.  In the meantime, I fear my dreams.

                                                     THE END

January 4, 2024 at 3:27 pm Leave a comment

WHO I AM

Some time ago I received a questionnaire from Book Buzzr, a marketing website I’m using to promote my novel, New Moon Rising. I thought I would share my answers to give you a closer look into who I am.

BOOK BUZZR

 

Could you tell us a little about yourself?

Now a retired scientist, I spent 34 years studying renal physiology.

I’m a Newark, New Jersey boy now living in West Chester, Pennsylvania, divorced with two outstanding daughters. One is a farmer working for the Rodale Institute and the other is pursing and MFA in fiction at Syracuse University.

 

Describe your book, New Moon Rising, in 30 words or less.

The novel is science fiction centered on the Ring of Fire. Think of the movie, Deep Impact, but in reverse.

 

What was the hardest part of writing this book?

Editing? I hate editing. The initial story just flowed. I went along with the characters and saw the action through their eyes. But when it came to editing the adventure was over, and I missed it.

 

What books had the greatest influence on you?

When I was in high school I read three books by Tom Dooley, a doctor who went to Laos, among other countries, to provide medical assistance. Of the three, the only title I can remember is The Night They Burned the Mountain.

His work was influential in establishing CARE.

What Dooley did to me I could never reverse. His words established in me the need for a sense of purpose, that you must strive to make a difference. Even at my advanced age, I cannot shake this mind-set.

 

Briefly share with us what you do to market your book.

Not enough. I have has one signing at a local bookstore which went quite well.

I am, of course on your site. I also have a blog, walttriznastories.wordpress.com, where I have discussed my novel and have provided links to my publisher, Melange Books, barns&noble.com and amazon.com., where my novel is available.  But the primary purpose of my blog is to provide help for writers on the road to publication.

 

How do you spend your time when you are not writing?

I read a great deal, as most writers do. I firmly believe the basis for any writers desire to write begins with reading and the love for books. Of house and outside chores also require certain amount of time.

 

What are you working on next?

I have multiple short stories I am editing and hope to publish.

I also have two novels that are written and need to be edited and published.

The first, Sweet Depression, follows a corrupt high-level officer in a pharmaceutical company fulfilling his need for control and greed with devastating results. Think of a cross between novels written by James Patterson and Robin Cook.

The second novel, The Beast Awaits, combines illicit stem cell research creating a monster mindlessly intent on destroying our world.   

October 7, 2016 at 9:24 pm 1 comment

SUBMITTED: ELMO’S INVENTION

A few days ago, after many rewrites, I finally finished my novella, Elmo’s Invention.  This 16,500 word work is a prequel to my first published Elmo novella, Elmo’s Sojourn, available from Melange Books.

Completing this current novella took quite longer than it should.  Life’s been rough but that’s part of the experience.  But once finished, off it went to Melange Books hopefully with a happy outcome.

Not to give too much away, Elmo’s Invention is the story of a Los Alamos scientist, Elmo, who tinkers in his cellar with ‘off the wall’ ideas that no one would pay him to pursue.  In the course of his tinkering, he invents the perfect prison, but that was not the result he was after.

If this stirs your interest, I’ll let you know if it is published and you interest can be satisfied.

Here are some links where you may purchase my work.

Melange Books

http://www.melange-books.com/authors/walttrizna/index.html

Barnes & Noble.com

http://www.barnesandnoble.com/s/walt-trizna?store=book&keyword=walt+trizna

Amazon.com

http://www.amazon.com/s/ref=nb_sb_noss?url=search-alias%3Dstripbooks&field-keywords=walt+trizna

September 24, 2015 at 5:41 pm Leave a comment

RANTS & RAVES: SCIENCE FICTION MOVIES WITH NO BELIEVABLE SCIENCE

This may be the rants of an old man, or the product of age and wisdom. Age and wisdom, really.

Anyway, whatever it is, it is not a commercial for Netflix. But if they want to pay me, the income would be welcome. But I doubt they would see my comments worthy of pecuniary rewards. (There goes three years of high school Latin.)

I have been, of late, watching a great deal of horror and science fiction using Netflix’s instant viewing option. Just a side comment. While watching horror, both American and international, I find that Japan, in my opinion, produces the best horror after my limited sampling. The Ring, The Grudge, both remade by U.S. studios, are Japanese movies. I have viewed other Japanese horror offerings that will scare the hell out of you, not through gore and special effects but through story and setting. Some movies had twists I did not see coming, or circumstances that make you think after the movie is over, and experience which stay with you.

Now, back to science fiction.

I’d like to discuss two recent viewings, The Ring of Fire and 500 MPH Storm, both Netflix offerings and both, I’m sure, originally from a cable channel, but I could be wrong. It has happened before.

The first, The Ring of Fire, takes place in Oregon focusing on a corrupt oil company executive and his daughter, an environmentalist, locked in combat over a drilling venture in the state. The premise has the oil company drilling a well far deeper than they were permitted, and instead of tapping a huge dome of oil, headed for magma. Puncturing the magma dome could set off an event, tied to the volcanoes surrounding the Ring of Fire, triggering an event that would destroy all life on the planet. For those who don’t know, the Ring of Fire boarders the Pacific Ocean and is the most geological active area in the world.

I must be open as to why I found this movie lacking. My published novel, New Moon Rising, involves a catastrophic event also involving the Ring of Fire. First, as I point out in my novel, scientists insist that geological events occurring in the Ring of Fire are unconnected. The movie assumes that every volcano is connected to a source which would cause them all to explode because of the drilling in Oregon. Finally, the method the characters in the movie use to solve the end of life on the planet left me chuckling. View it yourself and see if I’m wrong. Just a side note, in my novel, all is not remedied.

The second video, 500 MPH Storm, makes Plan 9 from Outer Space, a classic in its own right, worthy of Oscars, looking like well thought-out science. The science in this film is nonexistent. The scientific logic escapes me. The special effects were poor, at best. The last comment brings me to the inspiration for this article.

In my opinion, some of the science fiction movies produced today have little to do with science. I know it is fiction, but the inclusion of science fact, not just make it up to fit the story, adds enjoyment to the work. Today’s science fiction movies are ruled by special effect and lack any scientific redeeming qualities.

I enjoy including science fact in the science fiction I write. I feel that it allows the educated reader to become more involved with the story.

What do you think?

Here are some links where you may purchase my work.

Melange Books

http://www.melange-books.com/authors/walttrizna/index.html

Barnes & Noble.com

http://www.barnesandnoble.com/s/walt-trizna?store=book&keyword=walt+trizna

 

Amazon.com

http://www.amazon.com/s/ref=nb_sb_noss?url=search-alias%3Dstripbooks&field-keywords=walt+trizna

May 2, 2015 at 5:25 pm Leave a comment

STRUGGLING TO GET IT PUBLISHED: THE SMALL PRESS

Between major houses and self-publishing there lies an alternative which is the subject of this piece.

As far as the major publishing houses are concerned, most cannot be approached unless you have an agent and the agent makes the contact. But acquisition of an agent is not an easy task. An aside, for those writing in my genre, science fiction and horror, the major house, TOR, does accept unsolicited manuscripts. I read an article not long ago in which writers talked about obtaining an agent. In almost every case it was ‘I know someone, or I have an agent. Let me talk to them.’ You get the idea. Yet I’m still naïve enough to feel if your work is good, something good will happen. I could be labeled either a dreamer or an idiot, been called both by those who know me.

The far-end of the spectrum from the top houses is self-publishing. I’ve dealt with this topic in past posts, and will surely again in the future. What typifies my thoughts on self-publishing is an ad I see constantly in Writer’s Digest. In the photo accompanying the ad is a middle-aged woman with short gray hair sitting cross-legged on a mound of earth in the middle of the great outdoors, I can only assume there must be a Starbucks within Wi-Fi distance. She has her arms raised triumphantly while gazing at her laptop nestled in her lap. The ad proclaims, ‘Write anything. Publish everything.’

Really?

I don’t know if this woman is supposed to have just finished writing a classic, or just sent off the classic to be published. ‘Write anything’ I have no problem with, but ‘Publish everything’, give me a break. Does everything written need to be published, especially by someone unencumbered by the process of discovering if what they write is publishable? If you feel everything you write, that is not exposed to scrutiny, is publishable, you can stop reading now.

If you are still reading and feel the product of your mind should be self-published, please, please, please have someone other than your mother or your spouse read your work with a critical eye and who will be gentle, yet honest, with their opinion. Join a writer’s group or seek an online critique. I’ll these options in future pieces.

The purpose of this article is to discuss small presses, and now I will focus on that topic. There are a multitude of small, legitimate presses you are able to approach directly. I was fortunate enough to be accepted as an author by Melange Books. They provided help in editing, designing a book cover and distributing my book to online sellers, Barnes & Noble and Amazon, all free of charge. There are a host of publishers out there that want to publish good work, but do your homework. As with any industry, there are those that are less than honest.

My favorite source of publishing opportunities, Duotrope, https://duotrope.com/, is one place to begin your research. There are many other resources, but I find Duotrope the most complete and easiest to use.

At the same time, I must caution you that all small presses may not have the best interest of the writer in mind. As with any business, there are the unscrupulous and the scams abound.

Do your homework!

In past articles I have discussed Preditors & Editors, http://pred-ed.com/pubagent.ht, and Absolute Write Water Cooler, http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/. Both are fantastic and constantly update their information. Preditors & Editors provides information on publishers, along with agents. This is a site you must use if you want to publish your work and do not want to be taken due to an ego trip. The site provides recommendations and warnings of the unscrupulous.

Absolute Write Water Cooler offers writers’ experiences with publishers and agents. This site is a must if you plan to publish. If you search the internet for a specific publisher or agent, often some of the first references will be from Absolute Writer. Always check these comments by writers who have used these sites and provide first-hand information on their experiences. Both Preditors & Editors and Absolute Write Water Cooler and places you should investigate while seeking to publish your work, and they are FREE.

Good luck fellow writers.

March 20, 2015 at 8:12 pm Leave a comment

BOOK SIGNING

This coming Saturday, 2/14/15, I will be joining a group of local writers at the Atglen Public Library in Atglen, PA. The address for the library is 413 Valley Ave., Atglen, PA and will be from 12PM – 3PM.

I will be signing my novel, New Moon Rising, along with two anthologies, Curious Hearts and Spellbound 2011, where my stories appear. For those on a tight budget, I will also be giving away my short story, The Gig of a Lifetime, published in Toasted Cheese Literary Journal.

Come meet the authors and perhaps buy a book.

See you Saturday.

February 10, 2015 at 7:02 pm Leave a comment

NEED A BEACH READ?

Need that book for the beach you won’t be able to put down?

Give New Moon Rising a try!

Here’s a taste.

Chapter Twenty-Two

Pasadena

A phone ringing in the early morning hours is seldom a harbinger of good news. When Wade’s phone rang at two thirty-five in the morning, he came out of a peaceful sleep and with dread, reached for the receiver.

“Wade, this is Jeff at the lab.” The excitement in the young graduate student’s voice spoke of disaster before he revealed the reason for his early morning call. “It may have started. We have seismic activity along the whole Hawaiian chain. We have earthquake activity measuring 8.6 on the Richter scale. It’s the strangest earthquake, associated with the islands, anyone here has seen. The earthquake occurred at 4:20PM Hawaiian time. We cannot pinpoint the origin. It’s a series of earthquakes occurring simultaneously beneath the whole island chain. There have already been reports of tsunamis from Midway Island, the Marshall Islands, and the Samoan Islands. New Zealand, Australia, Central America, and China are all bracing for a giant wave. No one knows if the tsunami will be as bad as 2004.”

Jeff responded, “This is amazing! Earthquakes like this have never been described before. No one will know what to expect.”

“Jeff, try to calm down. Juliet and I will be at the lab as soon as we can.

Have the proper authorities been notified?”

“Are you kidding? Every lab in the world recorded this event. Damage reports are already coming in from Hawaii and the damage is widespread.”

“We are also getting signs of volcanic activity around the dormant volcano you instrumented on the island of Hawaii. There have been reports of ash spewing from several volcanoes on some of the islands that haven’t had activity for hundreds, or in some cases, thousands of years.

Wade’s thoughts instantly went to Foster on Oahu. “Is there any report of activity of Oahu?”

“Koolau volcano on Oahu is reported to be putting out ash and smoke.” Wade finished by saying, “We’re on our way, Jeff.”

Wade tried to control his own emotions as he turned toward Juliet. She had propped up her pillow and was listening to the conversation. Just from hearing Wade’s end, she knew that the news was not good.

With fear in his voice, he said, “It looks like it’s begun.” He went on to tell her all that he knew from Jeff as they hurriedly dressed and set out for the lab.

As they approached the Geology Building, every window was illuminated. Wade noticed that the parking lot was already half full as they pulled into his

organized and assigned specific tasks.

A group was told to keep track of earthquake damage and aftershocks. Another was told to track tsunamis, and a third group was told to monitor the Hawaiian Islands for volcanic activity. Constant contact was established with labs in Australia, New Zealand and their colleagues in Japan. There was an attempt made to contact the lab in Hilo at the University of Hawaii—but the lines were out.

With all the phones and computers manned, order began to emerge from the chaos. Wade had a chance to inspect the seismic tracings from the earthquake beneath the Hawaiian Islands. They represented not a single quake, but a long series of overlapping quakes. The location was difficult to determine. The earthquakes occurred at a series of points beneath the Pacific Ocean surrounding the Hawaiian Islands. The character of these quakes fit into the scenario along with the other events that occurred, supporting Professor Humphries’ theory. They were unprecedented in modern time.

Wade stood in the lab, holding the tracings, and wondered about his brother and all the rest of the population of Hawaii, people in love with their paradise. So in love were the residents, that it may have cost countless lives to enjoy heaven on Earth just a little longer.

* * * *

Oahu

Foster continued to work at the surf shop and Heather at the bed and breakfast although each had little to do. Heather took her baby to work with her and found time to feed and care for him while she accomplished her tasks. The working conditions were ideal for caring for the baby. In fact, Lulu gave him so much attention, that if it weren’t for the fact Heather was breast-feeding; he would need no care at all.

Although life went on, there was a pall hanging over the islands knowing that its days might be numbered. Foster had become close friends with most of the surfers who congregated on the beach and shopped at the store. A few that were originally from the mainland returned home but all the native surfers chose to stay. For the most part, they were young men who loved the surf and sun and little else. When asked about their future, almost to a man, they talked about quality of life—not quantity.

Foster was working behind the counter one day while Joe was grabbing some lunch when his friend Rich Loana entered the shop.

“What can I do for you, Rich?”

“Just wanted to see if you’d be interested in doing some surfing later this afternoon. The waves are supposed to be great today.”

“I should be able to get away around four. I’ll meet you on the beach in back of the shop.”

“Sounds like a plan, Foster. I’ll see you then.”

After Rich left, Foster thought about a conversation he had with Rich months earlier, when the news of what might happen to Hawaii was released.

He had had similar conversations with a lot of the surfers he had gotten to know. One conversation with Rich stuck in his mind.

He’d asked Rich, “What will you do now, Rich?” “What do you mean—I’m going to surf.”

“No, you know what I’m talking about. When are you leaving?” “I’m not.”

“You can’t stay here, it’s not safe.”

“Listen Foster, I was born on this island, it’s my home, the only place I’ve ever lived. And surfing is the only thing I know how to do. I don’t have an education. I don’t have a skill. If I moved to the mainland, what would I do? I’d be a bum the rest of my life. I’m a bum here, but at least I have a chance to do what I love. If this theory is wrong – no harm done. If its right, I’ll be doing what I love doing right to the end.”

Foster found that most of the native-born Hawaiian surfers he talked to had a similar attitude. They were determined to embrace their ‘hang loose’ attitude of life right to the end.

* * * *

Traffic through the shop was light, had been for months. Three-thirty arrived and Foster told Joe he was thinking of riding some waves until Heather came home. “I don’t think I’ll be able to handle this crowd all alone,” Joe said as he looked around the empty store. “Go ahead; get your butt on the beach.”

Foster got a couple good rides before Rich showed up. They rode together for a while until Rich caught a wave that Foster missed. Foster paddled back out to deeper water turned toward the beach and was preparing to get up on his board

It was 4:20.

He could see Rich on the beach taking a breather, when his friend suddenly fell to the sand. Foster thought to himself, “What the hell is he doing now?” Then he noticed branches falling from the palm trees. In quick succession, the roof of the shop caved in leaving a pile of rubble where the shop and apartment had been. He quickly paddled to shore, and as soon as his feet made contact with the sand, he fell to his knees in the shallow water. He looked up and down the beach and the few people still standing were holding onto a tree or other stabilizing object with looks of shock and disbelief on their faces.

The trembling lasted minutes, but it seemed like hours. Time slowed as the Earth shook. The violent shaking subsided, settling down to series of lesser and lesser ripples of movement. Foster ran around front and found Joe sitting on the grass clutching a blood-soaked towel to his head.

“Is this what we’ve been waiting for?” asked Joe. Foster pointed to the south. “What’s that Joe, a fire?” “If it is, it’s one hell of a fire.”

Then they noticed pillars of smoke dotting the horizon.

“I think some of our dead volcanoes have come to life. Come on, we need to get to the B&B. Although the trembling had ceased, the trembling of both

men had not. A mixture of adrenaline, fear, and awe fed emotions waiting for months to be released. Both men knew in their hearts THIS WAS IT.

They hopped into Joe’s jeep and began the short drive to the bed and breakfast. A drive that should have taken minutes, took nearly an hour. The narrow road was littered with tree branches and debris from collapsed buildings and clogged with people walking, stumbling in a state of shock, and not knowing where to go or what to do. Screams could be heard from some of the partially collapsed structures, but for now, aid was nonexistent.

Joe could see the column of smoke issuing to the sky before his business came into view. As they turned the last bend in the road, there stood the B&B, or at least what was left of it, engulfed in flames. The men felt relief when they saw Lulu and Heather standing in the parking lot holding the baby. Their clothes were torn and they were both covered in soot, but they were safe.

They parked the jeep a safe distance from the fire and approached the women. Lulu was in hysterics, sobbing and could not be consoled.

“Thank God you’re all safe. It’s only a building,” Joe said as he embraced his frantic wife.

All Lulu could say over and over was, “Oh no, no, no.”

Foster noticed Heather was also crying. He hugged her and his son. Through choked-back tears, she explained what had happened. “Lulu and I were in the kitchen. Thank God we had the baby with us. We were preparing tomorrow’s breakfast when everything began to shake. Things fell off the shelves and the ceiling started coming down. We made it out just in time before the whole place came crashing down and began to burn.”

Lulu stood listening, clutching herself and moaning.

“A few hours ago we had the first guests we’ve had in a long time check in, a young couple from California, along with their five year old son. They went upstairs to get some rest before they began their tour of the island. They never came out.”

They all watched the burning structure as it caved in further. As the flames singed the nearby palms, they knew it was also a funeral pyre. Both women sobbed as the men stood helpless. Oahu and the rest of the Hawaiian Islands were also helpless, caught in the grasp of a power that was no longer a theory.

Here’s where you can buy it.

Thanks.

http://www.melange-books.com/authors/walttrizna/triznanewmoonrising.html

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