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THE GIG OF A LIFETIME, PART I, A SHORT STORY

 This story was accepted for publication by Toasted Cheese, a literary journal, in April 2010.

                                 The Gig of a Lifetime

Sweats Connelly was having the time of his life.  He nodded to the rest of the band and played his heart out.  A glowing fog obscured the audience, but he knew they were there listening as he gave them his sweet music.

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Jerome Connelly grew up under the care of his unwed mother on the hard streets of an unforgiving city.  His skin was a rich ebony, and from the time of his birth, he was rail-thin with the delicate features of a father he never knew.  His nickname was Sweats, a direct result of the mean streets he called home.  His friends gave him the name because, even on the coldest winter’s day, Jerome would arrive at school drenched in sweat.

His friends would ask, “Hey man, why you always sweating?”

He would mumble something about running late, wipe his face, and head for class.  He couldn’t tell his friends that he was sweating from fear.  The walk to school was through streets where drugs were dealt, where people were shot for no reason, where life was cheap and held no promise.

First his friends, then everyone he knew began to call him Sweats Connelly.  It wasn’t long before there was no one who called him Jerome, except for his mother. 

Sweats began playing sax in his middle school band.  He continued to play into his high school years, but alone for his own pleasure.  With money earned doing odd jobs, he managed to buy a used alto sax, which quickly became his most prized possession and his only close friend.  Hours spent playing in the safe solitude of his bedroom sharpened his skills.  He was good, and with time to focus on his playing, he knew he could be a lot better.  Now sixteen, Sweats felt he was wasting his time in class.  He had discovered the meaning of his life and none of the classes he took furthered that purpose.

Sweats returned to the small apartment he called home one day after school and carefully closed and locked the door.  His mother, Martha, suspecting that something was bothering her son for some time now, asked him, “What’s wrong Jerome?  You just not yourself lately.”

“Mom, I can’t take this shit anymore.”

“You watch your tongue,” his mother warned.

“Okay, I can’t take school anymore.  I ain’t learnin’ nothin’.  I want to play my sax, that’s all.  I’m good Mom, and someday I could make some real money.”

Jerome’s mother bristled when he talked about dropping out of school.  “I want you to do something with your life, Jerome.  Not be like the bums you see everywhere on these streets.”

Martha said to her son, “It’s against my better judgment, school is important…

“I know mom, but playing my sax is important to me.  I promise to get my GED, but I need time to practice.

“Oh, Baby,” cooed Martha.

Sweats knew he had her.

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