CRITICS

August 1, 2016 at 10:21 pm 2 comments

I’m working on a short story, Cliff’s Note, recently rejected but with a good comment and helpful suggestions.  I have a rewrite and decided to try the story on my roommates.

First I tried the story on Sammy (Samantha).  Here is her response, not good, but she wanted to get close to my work.

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Next I looked to Millie for an opinion, hoping for a more positive response. After pondering their reaction, I decided I had more work to do.

 

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2 Comments Add your own

  • 1. slpmartin  |  August 1, 2016 at 10:56 pm

    Hmm…you have some tough critics to please at your house. 🙂

    Reply

  • 2. Sharmishtha Basu  |  August 4, 2016 at 6:42 am

    If you will go by their opinions your books will never finish 🙂

    Reply

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