CRITICS
August 1, 2016 at 10:21 pm 2 comments
I’m working on a short story, Cliff’s Note, recently rejected but with a good comment and helpful suggestions. I have a rewrite and decided to try the story on my roommates.
First I tried the story on Sammy (Samantha). Here is her response, not good, but she wanted to get close to my work.

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Next I looked to Millie for an opinion, hoping for a more positive response. After pondering their reaction, I decided I had more work to do.
Entry filed under: OBSERVATIONS & OPINIONS, Walt Trizna. Tags: cats, criticizm, dogs, opinions, pets, writing.
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slpmartin | August 1, 2016 at 10:56 pm
Hmm…you have some tough critics to please at your house. 🙂
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Sharmishtha Basu | August 4, 2016 at 6:42 am
If you will go by their opinions your books will never finish 🙂